Best friends without codes

In the subject of L/L Writing,we have to created a short story, we studied how to writed, and we have to end with this last phase: "And that was the last time she ever saw them"

Best friends without codes

           

Once upon a time, there were two best friends called Alan and Oriana. Oriana was 17 years old, she was a beautiful girl, so tidy, she was tall and with brown hair. Alan was 19 years old, he had black hair and he was very tall. They had known each other since they were three years old because their were high school classmates and they ended up being good friends, and going to the same school as their parents. One day they were eating lunch at school, everyone had brought their food and sat together, separated from their classmates, when Alan started talking and he invited to his house for dinner.

"What time do I have to go to your house for dinner?" asked Oriana.

"I’ll pick you up" replied Alan

"Well, can you pick me up at half past nine at home?" asked Oriana.

"Sure, yeah anytime", answered Alan.

Alan liked Oriana, and Oriana liked Alan but none of them knew they liked each other. Oriana went home and Alan returned to his house. While Oriana took a shower and was getting ready to go to Alan's house, he was with another girl, he was with Oriana's best friend. Oriana knew nothing about this. Her friend called Carolina did not care that their friendship was broken with it. Then she began to love it more.

While Oriana finished preparing, Alan had already changed and arranged to see her. Oriana got a call,

"Are you ready?" asked Alan.

"Yeah, you can come" replied Oriana.

Alan picked her up, he was very punctual. Oriana got in the car. After a few minutes Oriana was very embarrassed. When they reached Alan's house, Oriana was a little uncomfortable.

After dinner, they followed with some conversation. At one time the bell rang, Alan was going to open the door when Oriana's best friend, Carolina appeared. When Oriana heard the voice of her best friend she went to the door and Carolina was there and she asked,

"What are you doing here Carolina?" asked Oriana

"I am coming to see my boyfriend, Alan" said Carolina

"Alan is your boyfriend?", asked Oriana to Carolina

"It is my boyfriend, we have been together for two weeks now" said Carolina.

"But he is on to something with me!" exclaimed Oriana.

After having some talk, Oriana was very angry with Alan and Carolina. When Oriana saw them at school, she ignored them. One time Alan and Carolina had to go to a birthday of a friend, Oriana had to go there, but she didn't want to go but it was a friend of her so she had to go anyway. She didn't talk to them anymore, and that was the last time she ever saw them.